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demonicangel
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Originally posted by derek1222
Its a shame you cuss, take offense to be,
its rap and rhyme, meant to be funny.
You keep spittin bout my playas skillz,
but take a look son, yours aint ill.

This rap beat, beats rap rippin,
so ima stay clean, while you stay trippin.
So cry out to Bort, just a lil more.
I'll be glad, to take you on tomorra.

You're playing in Eastern Europe, are you kidding me?
Illest team there, is considered a Theory!
So before you come back with another Sam I Am!
Remember your fullback, plays for the drunken Clams!


wow I like this guy haha

 
demonicangel
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Sit back and enjoy the ride
And let me show you what feltersnatch can be
He has a 53 speed and 48 strenght
And don’t make me talk about his agility
He can blaze by your ends
In a blink of a eye
Make your quarterback lay there
And wish he would die

Here the one
Most corners know well
He can light them up
As easily as ringing a bell
You cant knock his speed
He can pull anything in
Then really smells goes out there
And does it again.

First your standing
Then you take a fall
You then just relized
You ran into the wall
You pick yourself up
And who do you see
Iamfat andslow
Staring back down at me.
 
derek1222
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Do I really have to reply this time?
I'm sick of seeing these weak ole lines.
Your lyrical paralysis should be a crime.
I hope your single, who listens to these whines?

Just remember, I have a book,
on the cover, you just got shook.
Defensive End, looking around.
Must be IT, a scary clown.

I hate to do this, your seem like a nice guy.
But poor pastry, probaly an American Pie.
So its over, sorry I had to do you in.
But in the end, maybe we can just be friends.

Not, Step back from the weak smiles and laughs.
This time son, its over in the first half.
Please don't spit another weak line about feltersnatch,
You're a perennial back-up, another Charlie Batch1
Last edited May 29, 2008 14:20:00
 
Superman2218
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Originally posted by derek1222
Do I really have to reply this time?
I'm sick of seeing these weak ole lines.
Your lyrical paralysis should be a crime.
I hope your single, who listens to these whines?

Just remember, I have a book,
on the cover, you just got shook.
Defensive End, looking around.
Must be IT, a scary clown.

I hate to do this, your seem like a nice guy.
But poor pastry, probaly an American Pie.
So its over, sorry I had to do you in.
But in the end, maybe we can just be friends.

Not, Step back from the weak smiles and laughs.
This time son, its over in the first half.
Please don't spit another weak line about feltersnatch,
You're a perennial back-up, another Charlie Batch1


Best one so far
 
demonicangel
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All I can do is laugh at your myspace pic
And all the women laughing at your little prick.
Maybe over the limit but it had to be said
How can a guy looking like you get any women in bed?


Throw the personel biz. right out the door.
Cause your givin me ammo and I dont need anymore
The only one spitting is you with your boys
And when your playing with, the new hustler toys.

We can keep this about football and away from a personal war
Or I can sit here and bag on your some more.
So just let it go, it can end right here
Btw my little bitch go get me another beer.



Last edited May 29, 2008 14:33:46
 
demonicangel
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Ill be back in a hour to give you some time to come up with something.
 
JKlipp17
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did u guys really turn this thread into dorky white guys writing raps? and if ur not white, u realize that writing, deleting, editing, rewriting, checking for grammar, etc... is not the same as rapping? this is poetically gay.
 
derek1222
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Before I question your personal motive,
let me give you a personal notice.
That Pic is from a Missions Trip in Mexico.
Sit and think before you quick my M.O.

Keep coming with jists that just aren't just.
While I smile in peace, knowing Im just that crisp.
You can rhyme with the e's and ear's.
Ima keep spitting lyrical genious for all to hear.

I replied as joke, for your 'yo yo' slap,
then I realized, this kid thinks he can rap.
Where from cuz if I had to guess from that mouth,
son you have been no where near, my dirty south!
 
derek1222
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I editted once, and it was simply to add a 4th verse last time.
 
Superman2218
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Originally posted by JKlipp17
did u guys really turn this thread into dorky white guys writing raps? and if ur not white, u realize that writing, deleting, editing, rewriting, checking for grammar, etc... is not the same as rapping? this is poetically gay.


I do have to agree with this
 
JKlipp17
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Originally posted by derek1222
I editted once, and it was simply to add a 4th verse last time.


which makes my point for me... freestyle = cool. grammy winning millionare rappers = cool. this internet rap-off is making both of you guys look like virgins.
 
derek1222
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I'd be happy to freestyle against anyone of you. I used to all the time, until college. I love how people use virgins as something derogitory. I am and I am 19 and in college and am not interested until I can put a ring on someone's finger.
 
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case = rested.
 
demonicangel
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Originally posted by JKlipp17
Originally posted by derek1222

I editted once, and it was simply to add a 4th verse last time.


which makes my point for me... freestyle = cool. grammy winning millionare rappers = cool. this internet rap-off is making both of you guys look like virgins.


lol i cant rap I know I cant. Im just trying to kill time. I love starting arguements.

Im 26 and god damn that would be something since I have two kids and im still a virgin wooohoooaaaa I need to talk to the wife.
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Derek (nice spelling) don't take this wrong way but the GLB universe didn't need to Know that you never had any. A little tooooo much info bro.

 
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