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Gart888
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Originally posted by euchrid
No, I read it.

Edit: Not saying what you suggested wouldn't make sense, but if you're describing all the facets of managing a team, it seems weird to only name two. (?)


some commas probably would have made that part less confusing
 
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If I had to guess, I'd guess we didn't actually write that, but I don't know.

I mean, the first paragraph is obviously typed from Yahoo's end, and the second paragraph is vaguely similar to our text blurbs but not quite. Not sure we rewrote it just for that.
 
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That said, the wording really isn't as confusing as it's being made out to be.

Switching the third "to" to "in" would make sense, but multiple "to" clauses is pretty common. Choose your color, from blue to red to yellow.

Edit: My inability to put coherent sentences together is why I usually work in perl.
Edited by Corndog on Sep 26, 2014 22:00:08
Edited by Corndog on Sep 26, 2014 21:59:45
 
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Originally posted by Corndog
That said, the wording really isn't as confusing as it's being made out to be.

Switching the third "to" to "in" would make sense, but multiple "to" clauses is pretty common. Choose your color, from blue to red to yellow.

Edit: My inability to put coherent sentences together is why I usually work in perl.


What said who to where to when now?
 
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Yahoo is ded in da playoffs.
 
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has any one actually joined from yahoo i wonder
 
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Originally posted by Corndog
That said, the wording really isn't as confusing as it's being made out to be.

Switching the third "to" to "in" would make sense, but multiple "to" clauses is pretty common. Choose your color, from blue to red to yellow.

Edit: My inability to put coherent sentences together is why I usually work in perl.


It is weird because the first two are actions in running a football team, while the third is referencing the magnitude of something. IMO, this would have been better:

"...Goal Line Blitz 2 lets you take on every facet of managing a pro football team – from player building, to coaching, to being the general manager..."

Then reference the "high-stakes" of the games in another sentence if that is so desired.
 
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Originally posted by chronicbomb
has any one actually joined from yahoo i wonder


I'm still shocked that people still use yahoo
 
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I still can't believe yahoo got rid of their euchre. Only reason I ever had to go to that site.
 
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My question is what is Yahoo going to do with all their referral flex
 
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Originally posted by PaulM
My question is what is Yahoo going to do with all their referral flex


 
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Originally posted by cyberninja
I'm still shocked that people still use yahoo


Fantasy sports.
 
TxSteve
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did this actually work? is that way replays are so slow they are unwatchable right now?
 
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Do you see any new people posting? I don't...
 
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im posting from inside a box on a yahoo page. wth
 
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