nice story, don't double your Z's, or better yet don't put any Z's. You'll gain more from the absence of S than the presence of Z. Also, pay attention to which form structure you refer to yourself in 3rd person in and which form you refer to yourself with pronouns. Also choose one or the other when it comes to "I" or "me" as using both shows you actually comprehend the difference. You can't spell read with the EA combo, but every other word with an EA combo was fine. Next time use EE for everything. Also, as you may notice I'm using a wall of text instead of paragraph form like you used. If you can ignore the rule of capitals, you can ignore the rule of walls. You should probably drop the punctuation marks too as they show you know how to end a sentence despite improperly starting every sentence. "Extradited" is a big word for a nonzz spellerzz. I got more hate than there is ketchup in a bottle of Heinzzz :O