Originally posted by UK Back
It should be "Beat" us
Not "Win" us
Winning is like I won a gold star
Beating is like I beat him in a test

As the board's resident expert on flaming without reading I bid you welcome, brother!
I can assure you inserting 'beat' into that sentence will only reduce the grammatical quality; of course, your proposal for him to re-write and re-submit his essay in order to use a more appropriate term for invictoration before the end of the quarter is a magnanimous gesture.